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I could fall asleep in your sweet november
Feel my bones freeze to eternity
As I watch you sleeping next to me
There is nothing I need from you but to remember
The insanity you bring about
Whenever I hear you cry out
Let me be your snow
Let me be that first kiss of cold
Don't push my grasp away
Let the numb take me ahold
There is a warmth that lies beneath the blizzard
A heat that tastes of ice
A freezing hint of spice
When I sense you, a taste to me is whispered
A tingling on my tongue
Makes me feel forever young
So let me be your snow
Let me be that first kiss of cold
Don't push my grasp away
Let the numb take me ahold
Don't leave me in this awful scorching summer
I just can't take the heat
I just can't fall asleep
But your winter snows will help me slumber
Holding on to you
Beneath your winter blue
So take me in your sweetest november
Leave me shaking with the cold
So I can barely grasp ahold
But let me sleep inside your sweet november
Freeze my bones in your kiss
Never thaw me from this bliss
And let me be your snow
Let me take that kiss of cold
Let me take your november snow.
Feel my bones freeze to eternity
As I watch you sleeping next to me
There is nothing I need from you but to remember
The insanity you bring about
Whenever I hear you cry out
Let me be your snow
Let me be that first kiss of cold
Don't push my grasp away
Let the numb take me ahold
There is a warmth that lies beneath the blizzard
A heat that tastes of ice
A freezing hint of spice
When I sense you, a taste to me is whispered
A tingling on my tongue
Makes me feel forever young
So let me be your snow
Let me be that first kiss of cold
Don't push my grasp away
Let the numb take me ahold
Don't leave me in this awful scorching summer
I just can't take the heat
I just can't fall asleep
But your winter snows will help me slumber
Holding on to you
Beneath your winter blue
So take me in your sweetest november
Leave me shaking with the cold
So I can barely grasp ahold
But let me sleep inside your sweet november
Freeze my bones in your kiss
Never thaw me from this bliss
And let me be your snow
Let me take that kiss of cold
Let me take your november snow.
Yeah. This song should mostly fit on that famous one by Aerosmith...ye know. The one from Armageddon (or something like that).
Anyways, see credit for the picture here: [link]
Edit: Changed a few verses that I had rewritten on a seperate sheet of paper that I didn't have with me when I submitted the original run on sentences are fun don't you think?
Anyways, see credit for the picture here: [link]
Edit: Changed a few verses that I had rewritten on a seperate sheet of paper that I didn't have with me when I submitted the original run on sentences are fun don't you think?
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Your prose is wonderful. You have such a way with words, I hope you do something with it in your future. Songwriter? Author? The world is yours. Just keep at it.
The 'run on' is nice. It "suggests with phrases" and that is every bit as good as any I've read, if not more so. It adds to the mood. Great work!
A reader and admirer,
Su
The 'run on' is nice. It "suggests with phrases" and that is every bit as good as any I've read, if not more so. It adds to the mood. Great work!
A reader and admirer,
Su